Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, March 26, 2020
Teeth -- By Georgie
I watched a video called Teeth. I then wrote a random ending for the story. I hope you enjoy it!
I really enjoyed making this. But I couldn't really find sentences or words that would make a bit more funny, and not just have the whole thing serious.
Have you ever gone fishing?
Have you ever laughed at someones misfortune?
Tuesday, March 24, 2020
Descriptive Writing - High Diving Giraffes
This is my Descriptive Writing On High Diving Giraffes
It was fun doing this piece of writing, but i found it quite tricky to add other adjectives.
Sources : Nicolas Deveaux
Have you ever jumped off a diving board?
Have you ever seen / pet a giraffe?
It was fun doing this piece of writing, but i found it quite tricky to add other adjectives.
Sources : Nicolas Deveaux
Have you ever jumped off a diving board?
Have you ever seen / pet a giraffe?
Friday, March 20, 2020
This is just to say - Poetry
Hi. I'm Georgie Magrath. In writing, we have been using the Get NZ Writing School Kit to send off to our buddy school. This is my poem.
I have really enjoyed writing this poem. It was really fun to make and reflect on the funny things we've done as a little child. But, I found it a bit hard to fit my words with William Carlos Williams words.
Have you ever eaten ALL the cookies in the packet?
Did you enjoy reading my poem?
What was your favourite part?
I have really enjoyed writing this poem. It was really fun to make and reflect on the funny things we've done as a little child. But, I found it a bit hard to fit my words with William Carlos Williams words.
Have you ever eaten ALL the cookies in the packet?
Did you enjoy reading my poem?
What was your favourite part?
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