This is my Descriptive Writing On High Diving Giraffes
It was fun doing this piece of writing, but i found it quite tricky to add other adjectives.
Sources : Nicolas Deveaux
Have you ever jumped off a diving board?
Have you ever seen / pet a giraffe?
Tuesday, March 24, 2020
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Wow! What incredible description Georgie! You may have found adding adjectives difficult but you have plenty of great ones. My favourite part is 'He was sleek with his golden body and rich soil brown spots.' Very descriptive. I think you could extend this description and get the the part where the giraffe jumps off.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you have used lots of exciting adjectives, this really engages the reader! I love your background picture too. Yes I have jumped/dived off a diving board. When I was 9 I lived near an olympic sized swimming pool in Taumarunui in the North Island and it was pretty exciting learning to dive there! great work Georgie
Hi georgie nice work
ReplyDeletethanks for the comments i appreciate it
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