Hi. I wrote this Non Fictional / Fictional story about my Dad's childhood chicken coop. (No this is not real!!)
I hope you enjoy this story as it took quite a long time to make.
Thursday, April 16, 2020
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wow georgie this is amazing i loved reading it from amy.
ReplyDeleteHi georgie,this story was very detailed and I believe that it took quite a while to write.I do love it but there still is some mistakes but everyone makes mistakes so i'll just round it up by saying i liked it quite a lot.
ReplyDeleteThanks Annabelle. I will fix up my mistakes š
DeleteHi Georgie,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your writing today. I loved that you shared it with our class on Google Meet. Have a go at putting your writing into paragraphs as it will add more structure.
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