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Wednesday, April 15, 2020

Lockdown Writing

Hi. In lockdown, I wrote a story with three things in it : Banana, a Pony, and a Movie Theatre. I really enjoyed making this. It was fun writing it and cool adding lots of imagination to it.
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 15, 2020 at 4:41 PM

    Hey Georgie,
    I love the way you described the pony as becoming a stallion! You are a fantastic writer. Keep up the great work.

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  2. Dave SutherlandApril 16, 2020 at 10:30 AM

    Wow! I always enjoy reading your writing Georgie. You use so many great words like 'slashing' and 'trembling'. It makes your writing so descriptive. I would really like to see you using paragraphs as a next step.

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  3. AnonymousApril 17, 2020 at 10:53 AM

    Hi Georgie,
    this was a really good story! I really enjoyed reading this. good job keep up the great work!

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